Starting with this post i’ll be putting up batches of pages – specifically complete scenes – rather than trying to do one a week. That was not working, and I think it’s going to read a lot better too.
Almost cut this scene, didn’t feel I had the ideas down, clear. But the story needs it, we get a peek inside Leslie’s head here. Amoung the things I did to fortify and re-write this was revisit some talks by Carl Jung and Allan Watts. Try to nail their ideas and voices better. Here’s a bit of Carl to watch. Well, more than a bit, a whole film! Look for Watts with the next page…
beautiful man.
and thanks for “The World Within” video link, bookmarked for later